P4

Client Feedback

I emailed the client my first draft and gave them some information about myself as well as the script.





After receiving the feedback from the client, I altered the script appropriately. There were a few areas of the script that were a bit too 'novelistic' and so I changed them or deleted them. I also had a to improve some of the introductions of the characters as they were not detailed or clear enough. Other than a few punctuation errors, the last thing I had to alter were the lab scenes as the client felt that they were 'tacked on'